X-MEN
-- "Weapon X, Lies, and Videotape"
Outline dated 5/23/94
Page 4: Please substitute a robot or some such for the grizzly bear Wolverine
fights.
Page 5: Please do not refer to Maverick as Wolverine's "drinking
buddy."
Page 8: Please substitute for the use of "Shiva," a Hindu god.
A name from Greek mythology, or some such would be acceptable.
Page 9: It will not be acceptable for Sabretooth to say he wants to "kill"
Wolverine.
X-MEN
-- "Weapon X, Lies, and Videotape"
First Draft Script dated 6/22/94
Pages 1 and 13 (flashback): Silver Fox may be in jeopardy, but she should
not be lying on the floor injured. Also, please lose either Sabretooth's
"...and tasty," or "just like..." to avoid a suggestive
reference to Silver Fox.
Pages 2 and 16: Please do not show Wolverine and Sabretooth "trading
blows" (socking each other with their fists).
Pages 3-5: Please do not have Wolverine intentionally slash the support
for the lights so they strike Cyclops, and do not have Cyclops seriously
hurt or knocked unconscious. Cyclops and Xavier should not require hospitalization
or monitoring afterwards.
Page 9: It will not be acceptable for Wolverine to say "I almost
killed Scott." Something like "I was completely out of control
when I attacked Scott" would be acceptable.
Page 11: Caution that the dummies are faceless, or some such, so viewers
clearly see that they are not human.
Page 14: Please do not have Wolverine attack Sabretooth first.
Page 15: Caution to make all the weapons futuristic.
Page 17: Please delete or substitute for Sabretooth calling Silver Fox
"squaw."
Page 20: Please limit the shots fired in the "Andre" scene.
Each person should fire no more than one blast.
Page 27: Please delete or substitute for Sabretooth calling Silver Fox
a "stupid skirt," and do not have him raise his hand to strike
her.
Page 31: Please have Beast stun the team members at the very beginning
of their attack on each other.
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