X-MEN
-- "The Phalanx Covenant - Part One"
Script dated 5/25/95
Pages 1-3: As noted at outline stage, a fight will not be acceptable in
the teaser. Sabretooth may not slam into Wolverine, who may not be hurled
into a brick wall and knocked unconscious, Rogue may not be "smashed,"
Beast may not slam into Sabretooth, and so on. Find a way to show Sabretooth's
capture without depicting violence -- no blows that connect, no injuries.
Page 7: Please delete or substitute for the underlined in Sabretooth's
"look who finally got up off his butt."
Page 8: While "Sabretooth" may morph into Jean, she should be
in standard costume, not a bath robe, and please delete or substitute
for the line "is this how you want me?"
Page 30: Please do not have the townspeople "splatter" when
Sinister blasts them. They may melt, or some such.
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